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Here's a little song I wrote..
Nov 26th, 2023 at 9:47am
 
"The three men returned to their steady digging, starting again at the lowest cleared natural terrace over the stone underneath, breaking up the barriers of mud, silt, debris, branches and such, and allowing the water in each terrace to flow downhill into the main stream, one by one, muddy water cleansing the river.  They used rakes, spades, shovels, crow bars... whatever they could lay hand to this morning.  Just before their self-appointed lunch time, they cleared a terrace that lead to a large tunnel.... almost as high or even higher than a standing man. The water and mud flowed out until the bottom of the pipe, for that was what it was.. a huge pipe under the roadway ... was nearly visible under a coating of mud.

“Should we walk through it to the next one?”, asked Mahomedi... then said in awe … “imagine that when the floodwaters were at their highest.'

Ladislav joined in – he was a man of few words, but when he spoke it was always worth the wait...

“I was here, on the road above, when the water was at its highest”, he said... “the water filled the pipe, no air space above, and you could see logs and stones and such coming out like cannon balls.... and people, I would expect... some people, though I never saw one.  Of which I am glad.”

The three men walked through the tunnel, the pipe under the road, until they reached the other end, where a heap of timber and debris had piled up, forming a small lake behind and upstream...

“Best we remove this carefully, one piece at a time.  We must try for a drain first so that it doesn't collapse on us”, said Wachaslaw... the others nodded sagely, and they set to.... one piece at a time... the water flowing down past their tall rubber boots and vanishing downstream, slowly and steadily draining the lake until they could begin to see mud appearing at its highest point.... from there the mud-filled water slowly receded.....

Suddenly Mahomedi cried out.. “LOOK!  That looks like a pair of hands rising above the mud!  Quickly – we must go to whoever it is!”

Ladislav put a hand on his shoulder... “Do not be too fast, my friend, there is still much mud and water, and you cannot help whoever that is now.  Let us drain this swamp first and then see.”

They dug aside the remaining obstructions as quickly as they could, then slipped and slid their way to the pair of hands. 

Wachaslaw took out his water bottle and washed first down the hands and arms, then where a face would be.... a face appeared under the skein of muddy water....

“It is a girl,” he said.... slowly the remaining water drained through the silt and mud until they could see the shape of the girl set in it.

Mahomedi and Wachaslav began to gently scrape the mud and silt away from around her body... trying not to touch her with their equipment and thus harm her any more......

Mahomedi stopped, saying, “Perhaps we should mark her and leave her for those following with equipment and such?”.

Wachaslaw pondered this for a moment, then said, pointing to the drowned girl - “What would SHE say?

Mahomedi nodded and they resumed scraping around the body of the young girl with her hands perpetually raised towards the morning sun... meanwhile Ladislaw was inspecting a small terrace to their right, perhaps 60 cm higher and towards the left river bank...

“There are more here!”, he called.... “two, perhaps three men, women or children!  I cannot tell yet!”

Wachaslaw asked over his shoulder without stopping his work,

“And what do they say to us?”

“They say that we need help, help, equipment, stretchers, and water.. clean water to wash them down.”

“Clean water to wash the river off them.”  Wachaslaw crossed himself....

Ladislav turned and began to make his way back downstream, seeking assistance..... the others continued working around the young girl.

When they paused for a break, the sun becoming warm on their coats, Mahomedi turned to Wachaslaw and asked,

“Who do you think they might be?  Jews, Mahomedans like me, Christians?”

Wachslaw turned up both hands in uncertainty,

“If we cannot identify them, we will never know...... they will all be buried under the same name.”

“What name is that?”, asked Mahomedi in mystification, “if they are not identified?”

“Unknown”, replied Wachaslaw.

In the distance, down the river, they heard the first trucks of the Canadian Army relief column arrive.... Ladislav would meet them and bring help....



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Reply #1 - Nov 26th, 2023 at 9:48am
 
... you might want to sing it note for note... I dreamed this this morning... start here and read down:-

The River


In spring 2024, the River Danube flooded... the rains came down and never ceased, melting the snow and the banks overflowed for days on end.. finally the waters subsided.

Wachaslaw, Mahomedi, and Ladislav – three miners from a mine now flooded, went to work clearing the river bed and releasing the trapped water.  Slowly they started at the lowest level they could find above a clear running stream, and worked their way up through successive terraces, each filled with mud, debris and water.... using rakes, spades and whatever they could find to do their work.

On the third day Wachaslaw received word that his missing daughter had been found, safe and sound, and was at a nunnery, and when work finished on the river for the day, he cleaned up, changed his clothes,  and went to her.  She was sleeping, the nuns said when he arrived, so he settled in an ante room in a lounge chair and slept the night.

In the morning, he was sitting beside his daughter's bed when she woke, with her usual broad smile to welcome the new day and the morning sun..... Wachaslaw watched her in wonder at her youth and ability to recover so quickly.

“DADDY, “she cried and they hugged ….”Where's Mummy?”

Wachaslaw considered, as was his way, searching for the correct words.. then spoke,

“We do not know, daughter – but we are looking.  Come – the nuns have given us permission to have breakfast together outside in the warm sun and clean air, clean with perhaps a smell of mud from the river, though.  Get dressed and we will go... I have some tins of food dropped to us by aircraft yesterday, so we can feast.”

As they ate, Wachaslow from a tin of fatty stew of some kind, and his daughter from cans of peaches and fruits, he watched her happy face...

“You have your mother's face, you know,” he said....”her eyes... her hair..... her smile ...”

“Did you.... do you... love her very much, father?” .. his daughter asked.

Wachaslaw looked around, and replied in his steady way,

“Do you love this warm sun, this beautiful morning in the trees in this park?”

“Yes,” she replied.

“Now you know.”, he said, and continued eating, “now I must take you back to the nuns and continue my work.  I will be back tonight – it is not dangerous – not like the mine.”

“Awrrrr – but you will be back?”

Wachaslaw nodded and smiled .....

“Good!”, she said ….”See if you can find Mummy!


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Reply #2 - Nov 26th, 2023 at 10:35am
 
Keep going ..........

Smiley Smiley Smiley Smiley Smiley
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Reply #3 - Nov 26th, 2023 at 10:38am
 
Sprintcyclist wrote on Nov 26th, 2023 at 10:35am:
Keep going ..........

Smiley Smiley Smiley Smiley Smiley


That's where it ended.... sort of a short story... a parable with a point...

You're back!  Still alive....
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Reply #4 - Nov 26th, 2023 at 11:36am
 
a lovely story- very enjoyable! Wink
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Reply #5 - Nov 26th, 2023 at 12:03pm
 
Agnes. wrote on Nov 26th, 2023 at 11:36am:
a lovely story- very enjoyable! Wink


As Jasin would say - sometimes our dreams are more of the real world than our awake times.  Pity it's impossible to carry on in broad daylight what one dreams so easily  ... never the same.  I dream well, some of those dreams I've turned into short stories... but it is so hard once the 'magic' has fled with the dawn.... harsh prose is never the same...
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Reply #6 - Nov 26th, 2023 at 12:26pm
 
You are a definite story teller....
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Reply #7 - Nov 26th, 2023 at 1:10pm
 
Agnes. wrote on Nov 26th, 2023 at 12:26pm:
You are a definite story teller....


But not complete ...
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Reply #8 - Nov 26th, 2023 at 8:46pm
 
Agnes. wrote on Nov 26th, 2023 at 12:26pm:
You are a definite story teller....

He is!
I love the unique names he gives the characters in the story. I wonder if I’m pronouncing them correctly in my head  Grin
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Reply #9 - Nov 27th, 2023 at 9:19pm
 
Sophia wrote on Nov 26th, 2023 at 8:46pm:
Agnes. wrote on Nov 26th, 2023 at 12:26pm:
You are a definite story teller....

He is!
I love the unique names he gives the characters in the story. I wonder if I’m pronouncing them correctly in my head  Grin


I have the continuing story sort of planned - but docs again tomorrow and then later  in December... apparently a bad test when I was in for cardio shows something wrong, I am bringing up small spots of blood, and have to see that Haematologist again.... one thing after another..... I am sick of being sick.... not a word from the kids, but I refuse to leave them out of my will..... they get their share plus the grand-kids get theirs as does the ex's daughter who's been so good .... more than I got from anyone... also my eyes seem to be having trouble running and my nose is, too... not as stoic as Wachaslaw ... eyes cross some times - bloody tablets...

Meanwhile I have stories to write and a world to continue to see.... birds to feed... vegetables to grow and pick ....  Cool

Oh - Vuch-e-slaw ... Mahom-ee-di (a Moderate) ... and what's-'is name... oh... Lu-dis-laW ....
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Reply #10 - Nov 27th, 2023 at 9:25pm
 
Take care of yourself Grappler- I love you everyone here loves you- go see a doc I say- tonight if you can !!
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Agnes. wrote on Nov 27th, 2023 at 9:25pm:
Take care of yourself Grappler- I love you everyone here loves you- go see a doc I say- tonight if you can !!


9 am tomorrow morning - rang and they said 'none available until 11/12'... I said - but tell her about the blood - she'll fit me in.. straight away.

Apparently a big bleed when they did cardio and a test showed CLL - leukemic cells in mammary lymph - where they connect one of the heart arteries to an artery... bloody hell... no wonder I felt lousy.... not just the op ... they're worried about this blood.... not anything silly - it's haemo of some kind... can't lose my hair if they treat... too late!!!

Night two a doc came around and asked how I was feeling - I said 'falcon dreadful' ...
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Reply #12 - Nov 28th, 2023 at 4:45am
 
Being a typical woman, I resist the urge to laugh at that falcon joke-it's too serious - I am hoping that you are being very careful until you can get in to see someone Grapps.

Stay in bed with a book or your computer- no laughing or getting excited at all...
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Reply #13 - Nov 28th, 2023 at 5:46am
 
In the wars there Grap! Get well mate!
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Reply #14 - Nov 28th, 2023 at 7:03am
 
Sir Grappler Truth Teller OAM wrote on Nov 27th, 2023 at 10:34pm:
Agnes. wrote on Nov 27th, 2023 at 9:25pm:
Take care of yourself Grappler- I love you everyone here loves you- go see a doc I say- tonight if you can !!


9 am tomorrow morning - rang and they said 'none available until 11/12'... I said - but tell her about the blood - she'll fit me in.. straight away.

Apparently a big bleed when they did cardio and a test showed CLL - leukemic cells in mammary lymph - where they connect one of the heart arteries to an artery... bloody hell... no wonder I felt lousy.... not just the op ... they're worried about this blood.... not anything silly - it's haemo of some kind... can't lose my hair if they treat... too late!!!

Night two a doc came around and asked how I was feeling - I said 'falcon dreadful' ...


This isn’t you Mr. Grappler.,I’ve always known you as a physically fit hard worker, with double stamina of anyone! Because of that, you will cope with whatever comes your way to fight it.
Keep up with medical tests and doctor appointments!
Keep us all up to date please xx
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